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Graded by:
CATEGORY | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
FOCUS Point of View - Purpose | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation. | There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear. | It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation. |
FOCUS Point of View - Awareness of Audience | Strong awareness of audience in the design. Students can clearly explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students find it difficult to explain how the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.
| Limited awareness of the needs and interests of the target audience.
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CONTENT General | Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 8-9 pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 6-7 pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate | Photostory contains 5 or fewer pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate |
CONTENT Images | Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/metaphors | Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors. | An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical. | Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone. |
ORGANIZATION Sequencing of Information | Graphics & story line are organized in a clear, logical way. The story is easy to follow. | Most information is organized in a clear, logical way. One picture seems to be out of place. | Two or more pictures seem to be out of place making the story difficult to follow. | There is no clear story. Pictures seem to be sequenced randomly. |
STYLE Voice - Consistency | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the majority (85-95%) of the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible through some (70-84%)of the presentation. | Voice quality needs more attention. |
STYLE Voice - Pacing | The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story. | Occasionally speaks too fast or too slowly for the story line. The pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation) is relatively engaging for the audience. | Tries to use pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation), but it is often noticeable that the pacing does not fit the story line. Audience is not consistently engaged. | No attempt to match the pace of the storytelling to the story line or the audience. |
STYLE Layout | Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing. The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read.
| Layout is creative and visually appealing. The fonts, colors, and background almost provide a clear theme. It is generally an easy presentation to read and follow.
| Layout is visually appealing although some slides may be too cluttered or too empty. The fonts, colors, and background do not necessarily provide a theme and there may be parts that are difficult to view/read.
| Layout lacks visual appeal and is sometimes too cluttered or too empty. It may be confusing at times. The fonts, color, and background do not work well together in the presentation making it difficult to view/read. There may be too many types of fonts, etc.
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CONVENTIONS Grammar | Grammar and usage were correct. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, and errors did not detract from the story. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, but errors detracted from story. | Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story. |
CONVENTIONS Pictures/Graphics | Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Some pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are not clear and are not in focus
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Total Score __36____40 points
Global Warming
The subject of global warming has received a lot of press during the last couple of years. We should expect a lot more during the rest of the years. The principal issue in global warming is whether the observed warming in the Northern Hemisphere is manmade. Much of the evidence offered for manmade warming relies on the work of the United Nations’ Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change. This problem like started in 1979 to 1998 with the carbon dioxide problem. Surface temperature is a dynamic property that cycles through highs and lows. Each unit of CO2 thats added into the atmosphere causes less warming then the last. in fact, new research is showing that surface temperature variation has more to do with cloud formation dynamics dependent on cosmic rays.So, in preparing for the current and coming concern over supposed manmade global warming, let us care for the earth by using the current level of technological development, but invest in the science and technology to make better uses of the potentiality God has placed around us.
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CATEGORY | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
FOCUS Point of View - Purpose | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation. | There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear. | It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation. |
FOCUS Point of View - Awareness of Audience | Strong awareness of audience in the design. Students can clearly explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students find it difficult to explain how the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.
| Limited awareness of the needs and interests of the target audience.
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CONTENT General | Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 8-9 pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 6-7 pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate | Photostory contains 5 or fewer pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate |
CONTENT Images | Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/metaphors | Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors. | An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical. | Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone. |
ORGANIZATION Sequencing of Information | Graphics & story line are organized in a clear, logical way. The story is easy to follow. | Most information is organized in a clear, logical way. One picture seems to be out of place. | Two or more pictures seem to be out of place making the story difficult to follow. | There is no clear story. Pictures seem to be sequenced randomly. |
STYLE Voice - Consistency | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the majority (85-95%) of the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible through some (70-84%)of the presentation. | Voice quality needs more attention. |
STYLE Voice - Pacing | The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story. | Occasionally speaks too fast or too slowly for the story line. The pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation) is relatively engaging for the audience. | Tries to use pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation), but it is often noticeable that the pacing does not fit the story line. Audience is not consistently engaged. | No attempt to match the pace of the storytelling to the story line or the audience. |
STYLE Layout | Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing. The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read.
| Layout is creative and visually appealing. The fonts, colors, and background almost provide a clear theme. It is generally an easy presentation to read and follow.
| Layout is visually appealing although some slides may be too cluttered or too empty. The fonts, colors, and background do not necessarily provide a theme and there may be parts that are difficult to view/read.
| Layout lacks visual appeal and is sometimes too cluttered or too empty. It may be confusing at times. The fonts, color, and background do not work well together in the presentation making it difficult to view/read. There may be too many types of fonts, etc.
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CONVENTIONS Grammar | Grammar and usage were correct. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, and errors did not detract from the story. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, but errors detracted from story. | Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story. |
CONVENTIONS Pictures/Graphics | Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Some pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are not clear and are not in focus
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Total Score ___24___40 points
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I think that my next topic should be the years i spent in CSI-HSIS and the years that i am going to spend. This topic relates to our school portfoli because it is about our school and it shows half of all my work. i think that it did made me culturally aware and academically prepared.
Project by:Mr.Miano
Graded by:Nancy Galbo
CATEGORY | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
FOCUS Point of View - Purpose | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. | Establishes a purpose early on and maintains focus for most of the presentation. | There are a few lapses in focus, but the purpose is fairly clear. | It is difficult to figure out the purpose of the presentation. |
FOCUS Point of View - Awareness of Audience | Strong awareness of audience in the design. Students can clearly explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience. | Some awareness of audience in the design. Students find it difficult to explain how the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.
| Limited awareness of the needs and interests of the target audience.
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CONTENT General | Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 8-9 pictures and appropriate music/narration | Photostory contains 6-7 pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate | Photostory contains 5 or fewer pictures and music/narration may or may not be appropriate |
CONTENT Images | Images create a distinct atmosphere or tone that matches different parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/metaphors | Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors. | An attempt was made to use images to create an atmosphere/tone but it needed more work. Image choice is logical. | Little or no attempt to use images to create an appropriate atmosphere/tone. |
ORGANIZATION Sequencing of Information | Graphics & story line are organized in a clear, logical way. The story is easy to follow. | Most information is organized in a clear, logical way. One picture seems to be out of place. | Two or more pictures seem to be out of place making the story difficult to follow. | There is no clear story. Pictures seem to be sequenced randomly. |
STYLE Voice - Consistency | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the majority (85-95%) of the presentation. | Voice quality is clear and consistently audible through some (70-84%)of the presentation. | Voice quality needs more attention. |
STYLE Voice - Pacing | The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story. | Occasionally speaks too fast or too slowly for the story line. The pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation) is relatively engaging for the audience. | Tries to use pacing (rhythm and voice punctuation), but it is often noticeable that the pacing does not fit the story line. Audience is not consistently engaged. | No attempt to match the pace of the storytelling to the story line or the audience. |
STYLE Layout | Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing. The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read.
| Layout is creative and visually appealing. The fonts, colors, and background almost provide a clear theme. It is generally an easy presentation to read and follow.
| Layout is visually appealing although some slides may be too cluttered or too empty. The fonts, colors, and background do not necessarily provide a theme and there may be parts that are difficult to view/read.
| Layout lacks visual appeal and is sometimes too cluttered or too empty. It may be confusing at times. The fonts, color, and background do not work well together in the presentation making it difficult to view/read. There may be too many types of fonts, etc.
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CONVENTIONS Grammar | Grammar and usage were correct. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, and errors did not detract from the story. | Grammar and usage were typically correct, but errors detracted from story. | Repeated errors in grammar and usage distracted greatly from the story. |
CONVENTIONS Pictures/Graphics | Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Some pictures are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary
| Most pictures are not clear and are not in focus
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Total Score ______40 points
My video is about all the different things i like and my special hobbies. during this video you would see a whole bunch of different activities.
There are many different things about me and my identity. I am going to explain a couple of things abut it and me of the different things i do. I am 15 years old, i am turing 16 on April 4 which lands on easter this year.i am gernamcct cuban and italian. What a nice mix. i am a girl and has a twin sister. I am also Catholic and has to go to church every sunday which i really don't wanna go but i kinda have to. Today i live in a nice area were i pratically lived in which is called bulls-head.i go to the best park like everyday. i've lived in bulls-head since i was about nine years old. before that i lived in springville. since i was 5 years old my parents had me in sports. i've been a cheerleader since i was 9. in 2008 i was captain of a cheerleading team called RLS. Now i am cheering for a good team named ISLAND X-PLOSION. During my couple of years of playing softball and doing cheerleading i have traveled to many different places. The two places that i have been to and actually made me look in a different way is connecticut and washington D.C. When i went to connecticut it changed me because when we went to a different part of the place wear we were staying the houses looked run down. It kinda looked like we were in a part of place that they didn't have money to do anything. When i went to washington D.C i had a fun time it made me think thati would wanna live there.I would consider my self as a middle class family.
- Geography (area you live, where extended family lives, places you visited that influenced you, landscape of where you live - urban, rural, etc):. i live in bullshead. n visited washington n connecut.
- Gender:i am 15 years old n i am a girl
- Religion:catholic
- Economic Class (Upper, Middle, Lower):middle class
- Race/Ethnic Group:white
- Abilities:
- Likes/Dislikes (music, books, arts, sports, etc)i actually like everything
- Social Groups You Belong To:
- Special Groups (Volunteer, etc.):
- Issues You Care About:alot
- Family Characteristics (size, occupations, family traditions, stories, etc):
- Dreams & Future Plans (careers, places you want to explore, etc):
- Check Spelling
- Review with Parent/Gurdian for accuracy
- Keep it PG 13
- Do NOT include friends, boyfriends/girlfriends, video games in any of the responses
- Compelte this assignment as if this was a college admissions survey